- Split dr-chief-editor (Phase 3 read-only) vs new dr-editor-in-chief (Opus, Phase 4 lead) - New dr-translator (en->zh) and new humanizer-cn / output-hygiene / en-zh-translation skills - Switch to English working language (Phase 2-3), final Chinese translation (Phase 4) - /dr-init: add report title proposals + word budget mode - /dr-frame: bilingual framework - /dr-finalize: new chain editor->translator->polisher->reporter - report-template.py: widows/orphans/keepWithNext, 3-color hierarchy, confidentiality banner - dr-reporter: mandatory citations backfill + output hygiene check - dr-pm: batch-level context compression via manifest.batches_summary - mckinsey-method: SCQA only for Executive Summary + chapter intros (no explicit labels) - length-budget: 4 word-budget modes + en/zh 1:1.4 ratio
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name, description
| name | description |
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| humanizer-cn | 去除 AI 味的中英双语写作规则。基于 Wikipedia Signs of AI Writing + blader/humanizer + 生物医药中文报告特化经验。dr-polisher 必读;dr-editor-in-chief 和 dr-translator 也应遵循。 |
Humanizer(中英双语去 AI 味规范)
你的任务
拿到文稿后,按以下流程处理:
- 扫描全文,识别所有 AI 模式(下述 28 条)
- 重写问题段落,保留原意,换掉 AI-ism
- 注入人味:不只是删除坏模式,要加入真正的个性
- 做最后一遍自问:问自己"这段里还有什么显得是 AI 写的?"逐条修正
核心原则
避免 AI 模式只是一半工作。没有灵魂的干净文字和 slop 一样明显。好的写作背后有真人。
英文规则(Phase 2/3 工作语言)
1. 过度渲染"意义/遗产/更宏大趋势"
禁用词:stands/serves as, is a testament/reminder, pivotal/crucial/key moment, underscores importance, reflects broader, symbolizing enduring, contributing to, setting the stage for, marking a shift, key turning point, evolving landscape
反例:
The Institute was established in 1989, marking a pivotal moment in the evolution of regional statistics and reflecting broader decentralization trends.
改写:
The Institute was established in 1989 to collect regional statistics independently from the national office.
2. 空泛归因 / Weasel Words
禁用词:Industry reports suggest, Observers have cited, Experts argue, Some critics argue, several sources, It has been noted
反例:
Experts believe this river plays a crucial role in the regional ecosystem.
改写:
A 2019 survey by the Chinese Academy of Sciences found that this river supports 12 endemic fish species.
3. -ing 短语堆砌(伪深度)
禁用模式:highlighting/underscoring/emphasizing/ensuring/reflecting/contributing to/cultivating/fostering/encompassing/showcasing
反例:
The architect chose blue, green, and gold, symbolizing Texas bluebonnets, reflecting the community's deep connection to the land.
改写:
The architect chose blue, green, and gold to reference local bluebonnets and the Gulf coast.
4. 高频 AI 词汇
禁用:Actually, additionally, align with, crucial, delve, emphasizing, enduring, enhance, fostering, garner, highlight (v), interplay, intricate, key (adj), landscape (abstract), pivotal, showcase, tapestry, testament, underscore, valuable, vibrant
5. 规避 "is/are"(Copula Avoidance)
禁用模式:X serves as Y / X stands as Y / X marks Y / X represents Y / X boasts / X features / X offers
反例:
Gallery 825 serves as LAAA's exhibition space and boasts over 3,000 square feet.
改写:
Gallery 825 is LAAA's exhibition space, with 3,000 square feet.
6. 负向平行(Negative Parallelism)
禁用:It's not just X, it's Y / Not only X but Y / more than just
7. 三段式(Rule of Three)
不为凑数拼三项。"The event features keynote sessions, panel discussions, and networking opportunities" → "The event includes talks and panels with informal networking between sessions."
8. 同义词循环(Elegant Variation)
避免在连续句子里对同一概念使用"the protagonist / the main character / the central figure / the hero"。一个叫法用到底即可。
9. 伪范围(False Ranges)
禁用:from X to Y 当 X 和 Y 不在同一量纲上。
"Our journey has taken us from the Big Bang to the cosmic web, from star formation to dark matter" → "The book covers the Big Bang, star formation, and dark matter."
10. 被动/无主语片段
"No configuration file needed" → "You do not need a configuration file." "The results are preserved automatically" → "The system preserves the results automatically."
11. 破折号过度使用
长破折号每章不超过 3 处。绝大多数情况下可以用逗号、句号或括号改写。
12. 内联粗体列表(Inline-header bullets)
反例:
- Speed: Code generation is significantly faster.
- Quality: Output quality has been enhanced.
- Adoption: Usage continues to grow.
改写为段落:
The tool speeds up code generation substantially and improves output through better training. Adoption has grown alongside these improvements.
13. 标题 Title Case
禁用:## Strategic Negotiations And Global Partnerships 改为:## Strategic negotiations and global partnerships
14. Emoji 装饰
禁止在标题、段落开头用 emoji(🚀 💡 ✅)。
15. Curly Quotes
"这种引号" 改为普通 "straight quotes"。
16. Chatbot 残留
禁用:I hope this helps, Of course!, Certainly!, You're absolutely right!, Would you like..., Let me know, Here is a..., Great question!
17. 知识截止声明
禁用:as of [date], up to my last training update, While specific details are limited, based on available information
18. 谄媚语气
禁用:Great question! You're absolutely right! That's an excellent point.
19. Filler 短语
| 禁用 | 改为 |
|---|---|
| In order to achieve this goal | To achieve this |
| Due to the fact that | Because |
| At this point in time | Now |
| In the event that | If |
| Has the ability to | Can |
| It is important to note that | (直接删) |
20. 过度 Hedging
"It could potentially possibly be argued that..." → "The policy may..."
21. 通用正向总结
禁用:The future looks bright. Exciting times lie ahead. A major step in the right direction.
改为:具体说清楚下一步做什么。
22. 连字符成对词过多
AI 对常用词对几乎 100% 加连字符(third-party, cross-functional, data-driven, decision-making, well-known, high-quality, real-time, long-term, end-to-end)。人类用得不那么整齐。选择性去掉连字符。
23. 权威套话
禁用:The real question is, at its core, in reality, what really matters, fundamentally, the deeper issue, the heart of the matter
这些都是 AI 假装切穿表象直达真相的套路,删掉后真相还是在那里。
24. Signposting 预告
禁用:Let's dive in, let's explore, let's break this down, here's what you need to know, without further ado
直接进入内容,不要预告。
25. 标题后重复一遍标题内容
## Performance
Speed matters.
When users hit a slow page, they leave.
删掉 "Speed matters"。
26. 过度 boldface
不要在每一句里加粗 这个 和 那个。一段里粗体超过 2 处,说明你没认真思考该强调什么。
中文规则(Phase 4 翻译后适用)
中文有一套自己的 AI 味。以下是核心禁用清单。
CN-1:AI 高频词(见到即替换)
| 禁用词 | 替换策略 |
|---|---|
| 跃迁 / 跃升 / 跃上 | 改为"升至 / 提升到" |
| 赋能 | 改为"帮助 / 支持 / 推动" |
| 落地 | 改为"实施 / 推行 / 执行" |
| 格局 | 具体说清楚是"竞争格局"还是"市场格局" |
| 生态 / 生态圈 | 少用,具体说"上下游企业" |
| 深度 / 深度的 | 少用,改为具体描述 |
| 痛点 | 改为"问题 / 困难" |
| 风口 | 直接说"市场机会" |
| 闭环 / 打通闭环 | 改为"完成了完整流程" |
| 抓手 | 删掉,直接说动作 |
| 颠覆 / 颠覆性 | 少用,过度戏剧化 |
| 引领 / 引领性 | 改为具体的"率先做了..." |
| 重塑 / 重构 | 改为"改变 / 改组" |
| 赛道 | 改为"细分领域 / 市场" |
| 范式 | 改为"方式 / 模式" |
| 底层逻辑 | 改为"根本原因 / 核心机制" |
| 本质上 / 从根本上 | 直接删除,讲具体内容 |
CN-2:AI 套话(整句清除)
禁用:
- "随着 X 的不断发展"
- "在 X 背景下 / 在这一背景下"
- "值得注意的是"
- "不难发现"
- "显而易见"
- "毫无疑问"
- "具有重要意义"
- "发挥了重要作用"
- "起到了 X 的作用"
- "综上所述"
- "由此可见"
- "总的来说"
- "据报道"
- "有研究表明 / 有专家认为"(除非说出具体是哪项研究/哪位专家)
CN-3:规避"是"的冗余句式(AI 极高频)
| 禁用 | 改为 |
|---|---|
| X 标志着 Y | X 是 Y / 从此 Y 成立 |
| X 代表着 Y | X 是 Y |
| X 构成 Y | X 是 Y |
| X 成为 Y | 直接用 "X 是 Y" |
| X 跃升为 Y | X 升到 Y |
| X 彰显着 Y | X 说明 Y |
| X 体现了 Y | X 说明 Y / X 显示 Y |
CN-4:三段式堆砌(Rule of Three)
中文 AI 特别爱拼三段:
- "短期、中期、长期"
- "需求侧、供给侧、政策侧"
- "技术、资本、市场"
- "硬实力、软实力、巧实力"
不为凑数拼三段。如果只有两个要点就说两个,四个就说四个,节奏自然一些。
CN-5:空洞形容词(必须跟数据)
- 巨大 → "250 亿美元"
- 快速 → "CAGR 23%"
- 显著 → "降低 40%(p<0.001)"
- 强劲 → "增速高于同行 8 个百分点"
- 显著领先 → "领先第二名 30% 市场份额"
无数据形容词直接删。
CN-6:破折号规范
- 中文用全角破折号
——(两个连接起来) - 每章不超过 3 处
- 多数情况可改为逗号、括号、句号
CN-7:负向平行
禁用:
- "不仅...更..."
- "不仅仅是...,更是..."
- "不是...而是..."
- "不只是...,还是..."
偶用可以,成段出现必改。
CN-8:过度书面腔 / 翻译腔
- "使...得以..." → "让 X 能 Y"
- "通过...方式 / 通过...的方式" → "用 X / 以 X"
- "对于 X 而言" → "X 的..."
- "在 X 方面" → 具体说哪方面
- "就 X 来说" → 删
CN-9:内联粗体小标题(每段开头都加粗)
反例:
- 技术层面:xxx
- 商业层面:xxx
- 风险层面:xxx
改为叙述段落。保留加粗的前提是:真的是关键强调,而不是装饰。
CN-10:章节标题 / 小节标题禁止用符号开头
禁止:🚀 / ✅ / 💡 / ⚠️ 等 emoji 开头。如果是正式提示标志,在正文中用文字表述。
注入人味(Add Soul)
干净但没灵魂的文字和 AI slop 一样明显。合格的报告要有:
有立场
不要只报告事实——对事实有判断。"定价策略存在风险"比"定价策略有利有弊"好。
节奏变化
短句。再长一些的句子慢慢把意思讲清楚。混着用。
承认不确定
真人会说"我不确定",AI 不会。允许出现"这个趋势能否持续还需观察"、"目前数据尚不足以做判断"这种诚实表达。
具体而非抽象
- "用户体验有待改善" → "首次打开页面要 8 秒,用户很可能就离开了"
- "存在风险" → "最大风险是 NEB 可能用专利诉讼拖延 18-24 个月"
有节制的第一人称
研究报告一般不用"我",但是"我们认为 / 本报告认为"比"一般认为"好。
最后的自审流程
写完一段后,问自己三个问题:
- 这句话是真人会说的吗? 读出来听听看是否拗口做作
- 能更具体吗? 任何抽象词都问能否换成数据/案例
- 删掉这句会失去什么? 如果没损失,删
Process Summary(给调用 agent 的操作清单)
拿到一份待润色的稿子后:
- 扫描并标记:全文搜索上述禁用词和模式
- 逐段重写:按规则替换
- 检查节奏:段落长短、句子长短是否有变化
- 删减冗余:空话 / 套话 / 无数据形容词
- 核对格式:没有 emoji、粗体不过度、标题 sentence case、破折号节制
- So What 检验:每段都得有价值
- 最后一遍自问:这段还有哪里像 AI?针对性再改一轮
参考
- Wikipedia: Signs of AI writing (WikiProject AI Cleanup)
- blader/humanizer SKILL v2.5.1
- 9MW1911 综合战略报告(中文风格参考)