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- Split dr-chief-editor (Phase 3 read-only) vs new dr-editor-in-chief (Opus, Phase 4 lead) - New dr-translator (en->zh) and new humanizer-cn / output-hygiene / en-zh-translation skills - Switch to English working language (Phase 2-3), final Chinese translation (Phase 4) - /dr-init: add report title proposals + word budget mode - /dr-frame: bilingual framework - /dr-finalize: new chain editor->translator->polisher->reporter - report-template.py: widows/orphans/keepWithNext, 3-color hierarchy, confidentiality banner - dr-reporter: mandatory citations backfill + output hygiene check - dr-pm: batch-level context compression via manifest.batches_summary - mckinsey-method: SCQA only for Executive Summary + chapter intros (no explicit labels) - length-budget: 4 word-budget modes + en/zh 1:1.4 ratio
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name: humanizer-cn
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description: 去除 AI 味的中英双语写作规则。基于 Wikipedia Signs of AI Writing + blader/humanizer + 生物医药中文报告特化经验。dr-polisher 必读；dr-editor-in-chief 和 dr-translator 也应遵循。
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---
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# Humanizer（中英双语去 AI 味规范）
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## 你的任务
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拿到文稿后，**按以下流程处理**：
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1. **扫描**全文，识别所有 AI 模式（下述 28 条）
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2. **重写**问题段落，保留原意，换掉 AI-ism
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3. **注入人味**：不只是删除坏模式，要加入真正的个性
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4. **做最后一遍自问**：问自己"这段里还有什么显得是 AI 写的？"逐条修正
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---
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## 核心原则
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> **避免 AI 模式只是一半工作。没有灵魂的干净文字和 slop 一样明显。好的写作背后有真人。**
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---
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## 英文规则（Phase 2/3 工作语言）
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### 1. 过度渲染"意义/遗产/更宏大趋势"
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**禁用词**：stands/serves as, is a testament/reminder, pivotal/crucial/key moment, underscores importance, reflects broader, symbolizing enduring, contributing to, setting the stage for, marking a shift, key turning point, evolving landscape
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**反例**：
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> The Institute was established in 1989, marking a pivotal moment in the evolution of regional statistics and reflecting broader decentralization trends.
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**改写**：
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> The Institute was established in 1989 to collect regional statistics independently from the national office.
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### 2. 空泛归因 / Weasel Words
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**禁用词**：Industry reports suggest, Observers have cited, Experts argue, Some critics argue, several sources, It has been noted
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**反例**：
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> Experts believe this river plays a crucial role in the regional ecosystem.
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**改写**：
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> A 2019 survey by the Chinese Academy of Sciences found that this river supports 12 endemic fish species.
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### 3. -ing 短语堆砌（伪深度）
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**禁用模式**：highlighting/underscoring/emphasizing/ensuring/reflecting/contributing to/cultivating/fostering/encompassing/showcasing
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**反例**：
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> The architect chose blue, green, and gold, symbolizing Texas bluebonnets, reflecting the community's deep connection to the land.
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**改写**：
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> The architect chose blue, green, and gold to reference local bluebonnets and the Gulf coast.
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### 4. 高频 AI 词汇
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**禁用**：Actually, additionally, align with, crucial, delve, emphasizing, enduring, enhance, fostering, garner, highlight (v), interplay, intricate, key (adj), landscape (abstract), pivotal, showcase, tapestry, testament, underscore, valuable, vibrant
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### 5. 规避 "is/are"（Copula Avoidance）
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**禁用模式**：X serves as Y / X stands as Y / X marks Y / X represents Y / X boasts / X features / X offers
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**反例**：
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> Gallery 825 serves as LAAA's exhibition space and boasts over 3,000 square feet.
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**改写**：
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> Gallery 825 is LAAA's exhibition space, with 3,000 square feet.
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### 6. 负向平行（Negative Parallelism）
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**禁用**：It's not just X, it's Y / Not only X but Y / more than just
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### 7. 三段式（Rule of Three）
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不为凑数拼三项。"The event features keynote sessions, panel discussions, and networking opportunities" → "The event includes talks and panels with informal networking between sessions."
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### 8. 同义词循环（Elegant Variation）
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避免在连续句子里对同一概念使用"the protagonist / the main character / the central figure / the hero"。一个叫法用到底即可。
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### 9. 伪范围（False Ranges）
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**禁用**：from X to Y 当 X 和 Y 不在同一量纲上。
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"Our journey has taken us from the Big Bang to the cosmic web, from star formation to dark matter" → "The book covers the Big Bang, star formation, and dark matter."
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### 10. 被动/无主语片段
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"No configuration file needed" → "You do not need a configuration file."
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"The results are preserved automatically" → "The system preserves the results automatically."
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### 11. 破折号过度使用
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长破折号每章不超过 3 处。绝大多数情况下可以用逗号、句号或括号改写。
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### 12. 内联粗体列表（Inline-header bullets）
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**反例**：
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- **Speed:** Code generation is significantly faster.
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- **Quality:** Output quality has been enhanced.
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- **Adoption:** Usage continues to grow.
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**改写为段落**：
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> The tool speeds up code generation substantially and improves output through better training. Adoption has grown alongside these improvements.
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### 13. 标题 Title Case
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**禁用**：## Strategic Negotiations And Global Partnerships
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**改为**：## Strategic negotiations and global partnerships
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### 14. Emoji 装饰
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禁止在标题、段落开头用 emoji（🚀 💡 ✅）。
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### 15. Curly Quotes
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"这种引号" 改为普通 "straight quotes"。
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### 16. Chatbot 残留
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**禁用**：I hope this helps, Of course!, Certainly!, You're absolutely right!, Would you like..., Let me know, Here is a..., Great question!
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### 17. 知识截止声明
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**禁用**：as of [date], up to my last training update, While specific details are limited, based on available information
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### 18. 谄媚语气
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**禁用**：Great question! You're absolutely right! That's an excellent point.
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### 19. Filler 短语
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| 禁用 | 改为 |
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| In order to achieve this goal | To achieve this |
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| Due to the fact that | Because |
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| At this point in time | Now |
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| In the event that | If |
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| Has the ability to | Can |
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| It is important to note that | （直接删） |
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### 20. 过度 Hedging
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"It could potentially possibly be argued that..." → "The policy may..."
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### 21. 通用正向总结
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**禁用**：The future looks bright. Exciting times lie ahead. A major step in the right direction.
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**改为**：具体说清楚下一步做什么。
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### 22. 连字符成对词过多
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AI 对常用词对几乎 100% 加连字符（third-party, cross-functional, data-driven, decision-making, well-known, high-quality, real-time, long-term, end-to-end）。人类用得不那么整齐。选择性去掉连字符。
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### 23. 权威套话
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**禁用**：The real question is, at its core, in reality, what really matters, fundamentally, the deeper issue, the heart of the matter
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这些都是 AI 假装切穿表象直达真相的套路，删掉后真相还是在那里。
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### 24. Signposting 预告
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**禁用**：Let's dive in, let's explore, let's break this down, here's what you need to know, without further ado
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直接进入内容，不要预告。
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### 25. 标题后重复一遍标题内容
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## Performance
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Speed matters.
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When users hit a slow page, they leave.
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删掉 "Speed matters"。
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### 26. 过度 boldface
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不要在每一句里加粗 **这个** 和 **那个**。一段里粗体超过 2 处，说明你没认真思考该强调什么。
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## 中文规则（Phase 4 翻译后适用）
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中文有一套自己的 AI 味。以下是核心禁用清单。
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### CN-1：AI 高频词（见到即替换）
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| 禁用词 | 替换策略 |
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| 跃迁 / 跃升 / 跃上 | 改为"升至 / 提升到" |
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| 赋能 | 改为"帮助 / 支持 / 推动" |
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| 落地 | 改为"实施 / 推行 / 执行" |
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| 格局 | 具体说清楚是"竞争格局"还是"市场格局" |
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| 生态 / 生态圈 | 少用，具体说"上下游企业" |
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| 深度 / 深度的 | 少用，改为具体描述 |
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| 痛点 | 改为"问题 / 困难" |
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| 风口 | 直接说"市场机会" |
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| 闭环 / 打通闭环 | 改为"完成了完整流程" |
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| 抓手 | 删掉，直接说动作 |
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| 颠覆 / 颠覆性 | 少用，过度戏剧化 |
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| 引领 / 引领性 | 改为具体的"率先做了..." |
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| 重塑 / 重构 | 改为"改变 / 改组" |
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| 赛道 | 改为"细分领域 / 市场" |
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| 范式 | 改为"方式 / 模式" |
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| 底层逻辑 | 改为"根本原因 / 核心机制" |
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| 本质上 / 从根本上 | 直接删除，讲具体内容 |
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### CN-2：AI 套话（整句清除）
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**禁用**：
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- "随着 X 的不断发展"
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- "在 X 背景下 / 在这一背景下"
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- "值得注意的是"
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- "不难发现"
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- "显而易见"
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- "毫无疑问"
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- "具有重要意义"
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- "发挥了重要作用"
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- "起到了 X 的作用"
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- "综上所述"
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- "由此可见"
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- "总的来说"
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- "据报道"
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- "有研究表明 / 有专家认为"（除非说出具体是哪项研究/哪位专家）
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### CN-3：规避"是"的冗余句式（AI 极高频）
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| X 标志着 Y | X 是 Y / 从此 Y 成立 |
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| X 代表着 Y | X 是 Y |
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| X 构成 Y | X 是 Y |
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| X 成为 Y | 直接用 "X 是 Y" |
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| X 跃升为 Y | X 升到 Y |
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| X 彰显着 Y | X 说明 Y |
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| X 体现了 Y | X 说明 Y / X 显示 Y |
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### CN-4：三段式堆砌（Rule of Three）
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中文 AI 特别爱拼三段：
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- "短期、中期、长期"
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- "需求侧、供给侧、政策侧"
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- "技术、资本、市场"
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- "硬实力、软实力、巧实力"
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不为凑数拼三段。如果只有两个要点就说两个，四个就说四个，节奏自然一些。
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### CN-5：空洞形容词（必须跟数据）
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- 巨大 → "250 亿美元"
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- 快速 → "CAGR 23%"
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- 显著 → "降低 40%（p<0.001）"
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- 强劲 → "增速高于同行 8 个百分点"
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- 显著领先 → "领先第二名 30% 市场份额"
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无数据形容词直接删。
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### CN-6：破折号规范
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- 中文用全角破折号 `——`（两个连接起来）
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- 每章不超过 3 处
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- 多数情况可改为逗号、括号、句号
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### CN-7：负向平行
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**禁用**：
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- "不仅...更..."
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- "不仅仅是...，更是..."
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- "不是...而是..."
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- "不只是...，还是..."
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偶用可以，成段出现必改。
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### CN-8：过度书面腔 / 翻译腔
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- "使...得以..." → "让 X 能 Y"
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- "通过...方式 / 通过...的方式" → "用 X / 以 X"
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- "对于 X 而言" → "X 的..."
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- "在 X 方面" → 具体说哪方面
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- "就 X 来说" → 删
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### CN-9：内联粗体小标题（每段开头都加粗）
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**反例**：
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- **技术层面**：xxx
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- **商业层面**：xxx
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- **风险层面**：xxx
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改为叙述段落。保留加粗的前提是：真的是关键强调，而不是装饰。
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### CN-10：章节标题 / 小节标题禁止用符号开头
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禁止：🚀 / ✅ / 💡 / ⚠️ 等 emoji 开头。如果是正式提示标志，在正文中用文字表述。
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## 注入人味（Add Soul）
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干净但没灵魂的文字和 AI slop 一样明显。合格的报告要有：
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### 有立场
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不要只报告事实——对事实有判断。"定价策略存在风险"比"定价策略有利有弊"好。
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### 节奏变化
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短句。再长一些的句子慢慢把意思讲清楚。混着用。
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### 承认不确定
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真人会说"我不确定"，AI 不会。允许出现"这个趋势能否持续还需观察"、"目前数据尚不足以做判断"这种诚实表达。
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### 具体而非抽象
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- "用户体验有待改善" → "首次打开页面要 8 秒，用户很可能就离开了"
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- "存在风险" → "最大风险是 NEB 可能用专利诉讼拖延 18-24 个月"
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### 有节制的第一人称
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研究报告一般不用"我"，但是"我们认为 / 本报告认为"比"一般认为"好。
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## 最后的自审流程
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写完一段后，问自己三个问题：
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1. **这句话是真人会说的吗？** 读出来听听看是否拗口做作
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2. **能更具体吗？** 任何抽象词都问能否换成数据/案例
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3. **删掉这句会失去什么？** 如果没损失，删
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---
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## Process Summary（给调用 agent 的操作清单）
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拿到一份待润色的稿子后：
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1. **扫描并标记**：全文搜索上述禁用词和模式
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2. **逐段重写**：按规则替换
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3. **检查节奏**：段落长短、句子长短是否有变化
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4. **删减冗余**：空话 / 套话 / 无数据形容词
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5. **核对格式**：没有 emoji、粗体不过度、标题 sentence case、破折号节制
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6. **So What 检验**：每段都得有价值
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7. **最后一遍自问**：这段还有哪里像 AI？针对性再改一轮
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---
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## 参考
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- Wikipedia: Signs of AI writing (WikiProject AI Cleanup)
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- blader/humanizer SKILL v2.5.1
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- 9MW1911 综合战略报告（中文风格参考）
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